Global warming is one of the most serious issues that the world is facing today. What are the causes of global warming and what measure can government and individuals take to tackle the issue?
It is believed bad air pollution and consumption behavior are possible causes of global warming. Therefore, the policy of imposing tax carbon and being economical person become solutions to deal with it.
Many societies either individuals or group such as company tend to give the contribute of global warming’s causes through pollution and consumptive habit that they made. This is to say, society especially people who live in big city are more likely to use private vehicle rather than public transportation which making carbon dioxide that redound increasing earth’s temperature. Additionally, buying non-friendly environmental things continuously produce more garbage that can pollute the environment. For instance, because of its air quality Jakarta was ranked number one with the worst PM 2.5 in Southest Asia throughtout 2018 and Indonesia become the biggest donator of plastic waste in Asia.
Apart of that, making regulation regarding the tax carbon and minimazing to buy something considerably are being possible solutions to overcome this problem. This is because, if there is regulation that can arrange transportation so people can tend to use public transportation in order to reduce air pollution. Moreover, if people can minimize their expenditure to purchase non eco-friendly things with implies of 3R (reduce, reuse, recycle). For example, the ministry of finance in Indonesia announce that imposing tax carbon which will be started on April 2022 as way to decrease the causes of global warming.
To conclude, due to having bad quality of air and buying more non-go green things can lead to global warming. However, making decision with increasing tax carbon and being economical person are might be solutions to tackle this issue.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1492.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48529411765 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.900816837 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595588235294 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.6060166574 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.333333333 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110442312268 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0437329387785 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0442416650643 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0714096824815 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0103770825337 0.056905535591 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.86 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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