Families who send their children to private schools should not be required to pay taxes that support the state education system. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Some people hold an opinion that parents of children who study at private schools should not need to make contribution to state schools through taxes. Personally, I’m in opposition to this view.
For a myriad of reasons, it seems unjustifiable to cut down taxes for families who pay for private schooling. First, it would be inconceivable to calculate the exact amount of tax reduction for these families, as it would require a costly human involvement to manage this complicated process. Second, there are already some tax-paying mandated services that people may not use. For example, many people are lucky enough not to have to call the fire brigade or ambulance in case of disastrous events at any time in their lives, but they would not contend for tax reduction for this. Furthermore, there would be a clear-cut issue of social inequality where the wealthy have to pay lower taxes than the poorer ones if rich people were given a tax deduction for sending their children to private schools.
In my school of thought, people should all play a fair role in paying taxes to contribute to and develop public schools. It will do wonders for all members of society to have access to an advanced education system that the young were given equal opportunities irrespective of backgrounds. This will lead to a better future workforce that consists of well-educated people, and in turn a more productive and prosperous nation. Families who send their children to private schooling will one day realize the merits of paying equally shared taxes in their own lives. For example, many international companies often demand high-skilled workers and competent staff to do the work, and only a well-funded education system can provide such employees.
To conclude, I totally oppose the idea of making any financial concessions to those who choose private schooling.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, may, second, so, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1560.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09803921569 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7905894477 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598039215686 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7605001973 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.0 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5384615385 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.84615384615 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31231072287 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108139623794 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0662877583593 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171813498908 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0710238192715 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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