In the developed world, the average life expectancy is increasing. What problem will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of aging populations
Life span has been going up quickly in developed nations which has brought about some downsides to the world. Nevertheless, with the development of human society, these effects can be diminished by some measures which I will discuss below.
Increased longevity causes negative effects on both individuals and society. As for individuals, living longer means being more vulnerable to chronic diseases. Human body deteriarates over time, when the body gets older, it is unable to function probably. This makes one easily contract diseases such as Alzheimer’s, etc. as well as unable to defend against infections. Additionally, ageing population also add more costs to state’s spending. The majority of elderly live on pension which virtually comes from state budget. The longer the people live, the more money needed on pension. Furthermore, senior people tend to need more specialized care due to their health status, which means increases in costs of medicatioin.
However, there are some some steps that both government and individuals can take to mitigate these problems. Firstly, in regard to individuals, one should always try to improve their health both mentally and phisically. A nutrious diet together with a regular workour routine can enhence one’s physical strength, which helps people stay away from some diseases as well as recover from illness faster. Meanwhile, good laughs accompanied by edaquate rest and relaxation can boost one’s mentality and happiness, which is just as important as taking medication. Secondly, with the major role, government can help alleviate the issue by improving healthcare system as well as increase retirement age. If healthcare system is improved, people can lead a better life and treatment costs will be reduced, which means less burden on state’s budget. In addition, If people are allowed to work longer, they will be less dependant on pension and more importantly they will contribute more to the society with their knowledge and experience.
Overall, various means can be taken to offset potential problems from the ageging population. It is crucial that both individuals and governments work together in this venture.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, well, while, as for, in addition, such as, as well as, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1854.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46902654867 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79958875564 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601769911504 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 567.9 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.8181336491 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.7 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.95 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.15 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193626535737 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0556278847599 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.04744616114 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127916854172 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0356102670585 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.15 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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