Schools are no longer necessary because children can get so much information available through the internet, and they can study just as well at home. To what extent do agree or disagree
It is a common belief that the growth of old people brings back benefits for the economy, society and business. However, there is a more persuasive argument that the number of elderly people increasing quickly will exceed the number of young people.
On the one hand, old people often have invaluable work experience, including diverse thoughts and approaches. And they are reliable for training the younger, less-experienced employees. To illustrate, the elderly have studied and worked for at least 30 years so they would specialize in their major. Furthermore, for older workers, job security is more important than money so they cost much less than the younger one, thereby saving on the budgeting for companies.
Nevertheless, I support the idea that an aging population will make the economy suffer. The government will need to divert more funding into elderly care, which will produce a lack of funding in other areas. For example, in 1968, the average life expectancy in the U.S was slightly less than 70 years old, but has been rising to reach almost 79 years old in 2016. This population boom is putting increased pressure on social security and public health services. The home care market is expected to rise from $100 billion in 2016 to $225 billion by 2024. Moreover, a growing younger population is needed to maintain the society's stability. Youthful populations are generally more happy and active. This may be because they have less old age-associated illness that makes them work more and maintain themselves happily.
To sum up, it is apparent that the aging population has also contributed to business, economy and society. It is undeniable that the youthful population is also valuable in these majors.
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- Some people who have been in prison become good citizens later Some say that these are the best people to talk to school students about the dangers of committing a crime To what extent do you agree or disagree 73
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 268, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: S
...8, the average life expectancy in the U.S was slightly less than 70 years old, bu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, at least, for example, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1447.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13120567376 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73717751295 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613475177305 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.1374278098 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 90.4375 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.625 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.375 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0550672756088 0.244688304435 23% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0170688035791 0.084324248473 20% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.029731164747 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.027743587092 0.151304729494 18% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0357624416394 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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