It is said: “There are times, when it has passed, to realize that it is forever engraved in the memory”. The same is true of student love: simple, beautiful, and full of memories. So, Are college love moment all the best? While advocates argue that it is plausible, others suggest otherwise. Personally looking, I partly agree with this standpoint that students should have a college relationship.
First and foremost, the main reason causing me support is the romance and beauty of Young love. As YOU can see, the student relationship is very simple, they don't care about each other's status or achievements. Just being together and going through a lot of beautiful memories together. All of that creates so many wonderful and memorable moments as a student.
It does not stop there, the next reason is more maturity in each student. For instance, when two people are in love, they have to be tolerant of other mistakes and responsible for maintaining their love. In addition, they learn to balance time for school, work, family, and time with their lover. Even a poor student can work harder to study better to pursue the person he likes. That not only proves maturity but also forge good experiences for them later in life.
As two sides of a coin, some people might think that while in school, they should not fall in love because it easily distracts them from studying. However, not all relationships are not good, affecting study or work. If students have a beautiful love affair in college, it will make life more colorful and wonderful. A love relationship, though not beautiful, will also give us experiences. Therefore, before deciding to enter into a relationship with someone, YOU should think and observe carefully so as not to choose the wrong person.
As discussed throughout this essay, college love is not only romantic and beautiful but also helps us to become more mature. Therefore, every student should have at least one love while still in school. It will create beautiful moments, beautiful experiences so that later we have good memories to remember.
It is said: “There are times, when it has passed, to realize that it is forever engraved in the memory”. The same is true of student love: simple, beautiful, and full of memories. So, Are college love moment all the best? While advocates argue that it is plausible, others suggest otherwise. Personally looking, I partly agree with this standpoint that students should have a college relationship.
First and foremost, the main reason causing me support is the romance and beauty of Young love. As YOU can see, the student relationship is very simple, they don't care about each other's status or achievements. Just being together and going through a lot of beautiful memories together. All of that creates so many wonderful and memorable moments as a student.
It does not stop there, the next reason is more maturity in each student. For instance, when two people are in love, they have to be tolerant of other mistakes and responsible for maintaining their love. In addition, they learn to balance time for school, work, family, and time with their lover. Even a poor student can work harder to study better to pursue the person he likes. That not only proves maturity but also forge good experiences for them later in life.
As two sides of a coin, some people might think that while in school, they should not fall in love because it easily distracts them from studying. However, not all relationships are not good, affecting study or work. If students have a beautiful love affair in college, it will make life more colorful and wonderful. A love relationship, though not beautiful, will also give us experiences. Therefore, before deciding to enter into a relationship with someone, YOU should think and observe carefully so as not to choose the wrong person.
As discussed throughout this essay, college love is not only romantic and beautiful but also helps us to become more mature. Therefore, every student should have at least one love while still in school. It will create beautiful moments, beautiful experiences so that later we have good memories to remember.
- Leo Buscaglia a famous author who was known as Dr Love once said A life lived in love will never be dull Every individual on this planet has their right to live and to love however loving in college or at school age has still been a controversial topic In 84
- Many students often say that there are three things they must do at least once in college fail the exam get a scholarship and have a lover Many people believe that falling in love in college is not a good idea but I disagree During their four years of col 73
- It is said There are times when it has passed to realize that it is forever engraved in the memory The same is true of student love simple beautiful and full of memories So Are college love moment all the best While advocates argue that it is plausible ot 78
- Have YOU ever wished to work for a multinational bank Some people believe that students who study English and Banking and Finance will be equipped with the most up to date knowledge and abilities to work in local and international banking and finance indu 73
- Love is a sacred and indispensable emotion in everyone s life Especially for students school age love is the first love in life the most dreamlike innocent and purest love Student love comes from first sight or intimate gesture the interest will make YOU 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 70, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...ge time is the most beautiful time in a persons life because it place between Young lif...
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Line 2, column 94, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'places'?
Suggestion: places
...tiful time in a persons life because it place between Young life and adult life. At t...
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Line 3, column 83, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ying can experience more than those who dont because they can explore the magic of n...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, nevertheless, so, then, therefore, while, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1963.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 397.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94458438287 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56375661818 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546599496222 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 603.0 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7022029887 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.055555556 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0555555556 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.83333333333 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.429896925069 0.244688304435 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144927532047 0.084324248473 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.15701570797 0.0667982634062 235% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.26521908545 0.151304729494 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.228325662047 0.056905535591 401% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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