It is said: “There are times, when it has passed, to realize that it is forever engraved in the memory”. The same is true of student love: simple, beautiful, and full of memories. So, Are college love moment all the best? While advocates argue that it is plausible, others suggest otherwise. Personally looking, I partly agree with this standpoint that students should have a college relationship.
First and foremost, the main reason causing me support is the romance and beauty of Young love. As YOU can see, the student relationship is very simple, they don't care about each other's status or achievements. Just being together and going through a lot of beautiful memories together. All of that creates so many wonderful and memorable moments as a student.
It does not stop there, the next reason is more maturity in each student. For instance, when two people are in love, they have to be tolerant of other mistakes and responsible for maintaining their love. In addition, they learn to balance time for school, work, family, and time with their lover. Even a poor student can work harder to study better to pursue the person he likes. That not only proves maturity but also forge good experiences for them later in life.
As two sides of a coin, some people might think that while in school, they should not fall in love because it easily distracts them from studying. However, not all relationships are not good, affecting study or work. If students have a beautiful love affair in college, it will make life more colorful and wonderful. A love relationship, though not beautiful, will also give us experiences. Therefore, before deciding to enter into a relationship with someone, YOU should think and observe carefully so as not to choose the wrong person.
As discussed throughout this essay, college love is not only romantic and beautiful but also helps us to become more mature. Therefore, every student should have at least one love while still in school. It will create beautiful moments, beautiful experiences so that later we have good memories to remember.
It is said: “There are times, when it has passed, to realize that it is forever engraved in the memory”. The same is true of student love: simple, beautiful, and full of memories. So, Are college love moment all the best? While advocates argue that it is plausible, others suggest otherwise. Personally looking, I partly agree with this standpoint that students should have a college relationship.
First and foremost, the main reason causing me support is the romance and beauty of Young love. As YOU can see, the student relationship is very simple, they don't care about each other's status or achievements. Just being together and going through a lot of beautiful memories together. All of that creates so many wonderful and memorable moments as a student.
It does not stop there, the next reason is more maturity in each student. For instance, when two people are in love, they have to be tolerant of other mistakes and responsible for maintaining their love. In addition, they learn to balance time for school, work, family, and time with their lover. Even a poor student can work harder to study better to pursue the person he likes. That not only proves maturity but also forge good experiences for them later in life.
As two sides of a coin, some people might think that while in school, they should not fall in love because it easily distracts them from studying. However, not all relationships are not good, affecting study or work. If students have a beautiful love affair in college, it will make life more colorful and wonderful. A love relationship, though not beautiful, will also give us experiences. Therefore, before deciding to enter into a relationship with someone, YOU should think and observe carefully so as not to choose the wrong person.
As discussed throughout this essay, college love is not only romantic and beautiful but also helps us to become more mature. Therefore, every student should have at least one love while still in school. It will create beautiful moments, beautiful experiences so that later we have good memories to remember.
- Studying ATC program is a bad decision Until now many people still believe that English language only helps improve English ability soft skills but does not equip specialized knowledge like other majors It is because of this point of view that the English 73
- The majority of people believe that college is the best time to locate a life partner Some people may also argue that having an important other at college will impede YOU from achieving YOUR full potential Personally I believe it is a wonderful thing to f 78
- English is one of the most spoken languages in the world so a foreign language degree is very valuable Some comments say According to the ATC program is a bad decision I completely disagree with this point of view because studying English language majorin 73
- Is studying English for Banking and Finance program a bad decision In my viewpoint it is a wise option to enroll in an English for Banking and Finance because it provides a useful study program and a plethora of work options for ATC students To begin with 73
- The curriculum plays an important role for every student at the university in general and the English for Banking and Finance at the Banking Academy in particular It determines the achievement and career of each learner It is often argued that attending t 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 70, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...ge time is the most beautiful time in a persons life because it place between Young lif...
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Line 2, column 94, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'places'?
Suggestion: places
...tiful time in a persons life because it place between Young life and adult life. At t...
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Line 3, column 83, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ying can experience more than those who dont because they can explore the magic of n...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, nevertheless, so, then, therefore, while, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1963.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 397.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94458438287 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56375661818 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546599496222 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 603.0 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7022029887 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.055555556 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0555555556 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.83333333333 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.429896925069 0.244688304435 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144927532047 0.084324248473 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.15701570797 0.0667982634062 235% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.26521908545 0.151304729494 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.228325662047 0.056905535591 401% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.