Young people who commit crimes should be treated in the same as as adults who commit crimes. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Many argued that juvenile criminals and adult criminals could be handled the same way. To my way of thinking, this will indeed bring a lot of benefits but besides that i also believe that this move will be able to change their lives for the worse. This essay will first discuss the main advantages followed by an analysis of the main disadvantages.
In terms of advantage, young individuals who break the law are punished like old law breakers can reduce the juvenile delinquency rate because of its deterrence. Heavy punishment makes them more responsible for their actions. Along with the outstanding news when the young offenders rate is falling, this idea can also help them to better change their own future and their lives. Above all, what is of utmost importance is equal, from several aspects and specific cases. A controversial issue is that young perpetrators usually receive lighter sentences that they deserve, which is apparently an injustice to the victim. Many relatives of the victims in these tragic cases are outraged
On the other hand, I trust that it is better for young people who commit crimes to be tried in a different court from that for adults. First and foremost, youth criminals are still children. Children are proven not to have sufficient intellectual or moral capacity to understand outcomes of their misdeed. It's too bad to make them suffer the same punishments as adults - who can already be held accountable for their actions and words. Second, we can all be aware of how our environment affects each of us. Therefore, leaving children in an environment with bad guys will adversely affect their personality. The most striking feature of this problem is their future. Going to jail or being severely punished will definitely be recorded on file. This seriously affects the future of juvenile delinquents. They won't even get anywhere because of their bad records. This is the key point. The new generation is always the young bamboo shoots of the country, those who cannot yet take responsibility for their own behavior, have not thought properly, should have a suitable punishment.
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...an analysis of the main disadvantages. In terms of advantage, young individuals...
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...ims in these tragic cases are outraged On the other hand, I trust that it is be...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, besides, but, first, if, second, so, still, therefore, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1773.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03693181818 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68770607277 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605113636364 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 551.7 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.9392380799 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.65 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163325384878 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0401075603966 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0570705276017 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0980497177643 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0561767862479 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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