Unfortunately, in contemporary society, creating an appealing image has become more important than the reality or truth behind that image.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
From my point of view, I am more aligned with the position that implies that creating an appealing image is more important than the reality behind the image for two reasons. However, I do concede that knowing the truth behind an image is necessary in some cases.
First of all, maintaining a positive, well appealed image or brand is important in business industry. One of the greatest strategies to win the heart of customers is to have a nice, well coordinated brand. Take for example, textile industries, most people prefer clothes with nice or fancy designs, sometimes ignoring the quality of the clothes. People move by what they see, an industry with a well packaged and enticing textile product is more likely to suceed than a competitor in the same industry who is only interested in the quality of the product.
Secondly, a man who needs fans or followers in the social world must put on a positive vibe, character or attitude no matter the chellenges
he is encountering at that time. Take for example, artists, these people face a lot beyind the scene, but they wont show it because they social influencers. No man wants follow anyone with a negative vibe, there is nothing much to learn from someone who is indisposed. Another example is the outward apperance of religious leaders. Everytime it looks as if they are not bothered with the reality of life, yet they put a smile on their face and on others arond them. This is important because of the kind of people they are and what they represent in the society.
However, in the case of politics, neglecting the truth beyind the image is deleterious. Most politians during their campaign shows only the beauty and exiting part of themselves to people so that they can be voted for. As soon as they have succeeded, the reality is dawned on people.
In conclusion, creating a appealing image is important in our present society in order to be successful in some aspects of life, however, there are times the truth beyind the image must be known to avoid deception.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, well, for example, in conclusion, kind of, first of all, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 58.6224719101 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1690.0 2235.4752809 76% => OK
No of words: 353.0 442.535393258 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78753541076 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57705368423 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 215.323595506 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535410764873 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 704.065955056 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.0291572206 60.3974514979 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.625 118.986275619 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0625 23.4991977007 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6875 5.21951772744 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197157978872 0.243740707755 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0647529664774 0.0831039109588 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0803352735252 0.0758088955206 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111188377196 0.150359130593 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104646927466 0.0667264976115 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 48.8420337079 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.1639044944 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 100.480337079 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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