It is difficult for people in the cities to get enough physical exercise. What are the causes and solutions?
It is true that many citizens do not have sufficient workout nowadays. There are several reasons for this serious problem, however, it can be solved by some solutions.
The main cause of this issue is the shortage of time in their daily schedule. Recently, people are under intense pressure to succeed so they do not have time to do physical activities. After a hard-working day, settlers usually have a sedentary form of entertainment to feel at ease. More than that, most cities now are surrounded by buildings and skyscrapers instead of green areas. In fact, in a recent survey conducted on citizens in my city, over 70 percent of those questioned stated that they prefer going to parks or lakes to do exercise to crowded and dusty stress.
However, there are solutions to this problem. One of the ways to deal with this is to raise awareness of physical activities for citizens. People should be convinced of the disadvantages of an unhealthy life. To illustrate, people who do less exercise often have worse sleep’s quality and higher heart attack than the others. Another way to improve the number of dwellers who want to keep fit is to construct more parks or areas for doing exercise like gym stores and so on.
To sum up, it is clear that there are many factors that make citizens not have adequate time for exercising, which is harmful to people’s health. Nevertheless, the issue can be resolved by modified dwellers’ daily schedule and building more constructions for physical activities purposes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, nevertheless, so, well, as for, in fact, it is true, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1270.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9609375 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74271050924 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61328125 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.3630833845 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.7142857143 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2857142857 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35714285714 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187114551435 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0587113329731 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0301922963838 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104757855774 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0480028563232 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.