Some people think that advertising aimed at children should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is said that advertisements targeting children should be eliminated. In my opinion, I completely disagree with this statement.
There are several reasons why advertising might have a positive effect on youngsters. The most significant reason is that advertisements could be considered as a new method of education. As the targeted customers are children, producers are likely to ground short memorable stories about various life values in their advertisements. As a result, while watching those adverts, children tend to naturally accumulate several life lessons. The advertisement of CocaCola for Tet holiday, for example, was about family reunion and bonding, which delivered a meaningful message to children. On top of that, introducing advertisements to children might broaden their common knowledge on a daily basis. For instance, while watching a promotion about milk , children are likely to acquire the benefits of drinking milk and what nutrients are good for physical development.
However, opponents of this would argue that early exposure to advertising might adversely affect children’s mindset. Admittedly, being bombarded with a dense amount of advertising might cause children to have a tendency of making impulsive purchases since they are not mature enough to thoroughly control their budget. However, this issue could be tackled by parents’ supervision and early guidance at school about money. Because of that, advertising for children is accepted as long as children are under parents’ and teachers’ control.
In conclusion, despite some drawbacks of advertising on children, it seems to me that the disadvantages are outweighed by the advantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1433.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.70916334661 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18289344113 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621513944223 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.021573964 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.357142857 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9285714286 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.71428571429 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225135536252 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0834845771303 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0511768845289 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152266287519 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.030804918826 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.54 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.7 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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