Nowadays, people living in large cities face many problems in their daily lives. What are these problems? Do you think the government should encourage people to move to smaller towns?
This is a fact that cities are becoming more congested due to increasing population. Today, urban areas are facing a number of problems. It is provided that higher authorities should assist them in sorting out these problems by motivating city people to shift in countryside areas. In this essay i will cover the issues that are encountered by dwellers of metropolitan cities and how government can help them out to solve these increasing problems.
On the one hand, There are several problems that are
experienced by natives of metropolitan areas. Firstly, lack of space is the major issue that is prevailing in large cities as more and more youngsters are moving to cities for seeking lucrative jobs and to take advantage of technologies in these sectors. Therefore, The figure for population is following increasing trend day by day in cities that makes them crowded. Secondly, Most of the large industries established in cosmopolitans as local people depends upon businesses for earning money. Moreover, Agriculture department is regulated by most of the individuals who live in rural areas. So, corporations are liable for pollution in cities because it creates smoke and tons of wastage that is unfavourable for environment. Finally, Road accidents is another big problem for urban areas as with growing number of people, they prefer to buy their private vehicles. As a result, it results in traffic congestion and accidents.
On the other hand, Administration can assist in eliminating these complications. First of all, if government provides better job opportunities in town and villages, people are less likely to migrate to cities because huge number of people move to find a profession. Hence, by providing chances of jobs in towns, it can motivate people to settle down in rural areas. In addition to this, For taking advantage of numerous amenities, people tend to move towards big cities. So, rulers must establish facilities for masses living in towns for controlling cities’ population.
To summarize, Although i strongly believe that urban areas come across various difficulties in these days, government can take steps for the positive development of both cities and rural areas.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, in addition, as a result, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1860.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28409090909 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95659347724 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553977272727 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 594.0 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4424907205 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.333333333 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5555555556 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.88888888889 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247973413129 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0714462389675 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0491922840588 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134157561063 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0501032438756 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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