In some countries, young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people to do this and give your own opinion.
It is common these days for youngsters in some countries to have a break from studying after graduating from high school and get a job or go on a travel. This trend would create certain benefits but there would also be some possible drawbacks.
On the one hand, it is clear that a gap year would create several advantages for young people. One evident strength is that it would help students make the right decisions about their future careers. While having different jobs, they can gain experience and have a broader view of their career paths. Another reason is that it would provide youngsters with a chance to develop necessary skills such as communication skills and broaden their general knowledge of different cultures after traveling. Last but not least, young people who take a gap year tend to be more independent, which is an important factor in university life, as well as giving them an advantage in terms of handling difficulties in student life.
On the other hand, there are some obvious disadvantages that would arise. Firstly, young adults might be exposed to an excessive number of options and have difficulty deciding which career to choose. Secondly, they may end up not returning to higher studies or finding it difficult to re-adapt to an academic environment. For example, they may think it is better to continue their current job or to do different things rather than enroll in a university course.
In conclusion, there are plus points to working and travelling for a year after high school regarding helping make the right decision on careers, developing essential skills and being more independent. However, the downside would emerge consequently in terms of too many job options and difficulties readjusting to an academic environment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 145, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'travel'.
Suggestion: travel
...from high school and get a job or go on a travel. This trend would create certain benefi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, may, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1478.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06164383562 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75460855077 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58904109589 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0849100026 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.692307692 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4615384615 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.1538461538 7.06120827912 186% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211520352867 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0683971859808 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0663461133822 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124245120736 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0183536086281 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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