Employer sometimes ask people, applying for jobs, for personal information, such as their hobbies and interests, and whether they are married or single. Some people say that this information may be relevant and useful. Others disagree.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Many people believe that disclosing personal biodata, such as marital status, or hobbies and interest are logical and beneficial to the the companies. However, others agree that they are unethical and immoral to mention it. I firmly agree with the latter viewpoint, as it has nothing to do with work profiles.
To begin with, nowadays, a growing number of businesses have started to ask for personal background from the workers. Certainly, it helps them to make a friendly bond , and for knowing the staff more closely. However, it also has some negative consequences; what if the hobbies of a job seeker can become a possible obstacle in the job?, or what if a job aspirant is addicted of some hobbies, and sometimes, it distracts him in doing the work? For example, one of my friends was not shortlisted for an job opening because he has mentioned, playing video game as his hobby. Another example is of my co-worker, who was addicted to handle social media at workplace. However, both of them were technical sound, and fit for those jobs, but disclosing hobbies and it's addiction respectively ruined their career images. Hence, some of the personal data may sound unusual and unrealistic to the employer, and therefore, it may not worth to reveal it.
On contrary, disclosing of personal data to the companies can also be beneficial to those, who are applying for a job in the Periphery of his/her interest. A majority of people are increasingly choosing their hobbies as work areas, so that they can use requisite skills required and applicable to those jobs. For instance, my friend has chose painting as her career to further strengthen her art skills. Moreover, she is earning a handsome amount of money by selling them in the exhibitions. As a result, hobbies bring opportunities to earn.
To conclude, disclosing of personal information is only useful if the area of work has to do something with that. It may add advantages only if an employer is looking or asking for those interests, or personal information with regards to the jobs. On the other hand, unnecessarily providing of such information may mislead companies towards an unimpressive record of candidature. To me, I disagree to unmask personal information to the employers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, then, therefore, as to, for example, for instance, such as, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1877.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 376.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9920212766 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89100819107 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55585106383 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 594.0 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 0.809619238477 988% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.307575449 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.7894736842 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7894736842 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.47368421053 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.333367693272 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0891054873123 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0553736452884 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18441825975 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0472462432302 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.