Shopping is becoming more and more popular as leisure activity. However, some people feel that this has both positive and negative effects.
Why is shopping so popular?
What effects does its increase in popularity have on individuals and on society?
Irrespective of gender, age, financial capacity, all people in a society are fond of shopping. However, in recent times, it’s gaining importance and is been considered as an activity to be done in free time. We will see the major reason for this in below paragraph.
With increasing stress levels, scarcity of time and increase in earning, needs and demands of a person are changing quite frequently. Technology evolution is bringing new products in market and advertising is giving broader coverage to these new products which tempts an individual to procure those items. In addition, with paramount in mall culture, has resulted into availability of different products under a single roof. Hence willingness to go for shopping with family and friends, during leisure time and on weekends is growing day by day. However, this increasing popularity towards shopping has both advantages and disadvantages for an individual as well as society as a whole.
As an individual, shopping not only gives a person new and latest items but also enriches him with moments of happiness, joy and opportunity to spend time with family and friends. But at the same time, he is losing money, time and his attachments towards the things he already possessing. For example: With launch of new apple phone, many people are waiting in long queues outside apple Shoppe even after having one mobile phone in hand.
If we consider society as a whole, positives of this increasing trends is more money is being infuse in the economy which can further be used improvement of infrastructure and upgrading low income groups. But on the contrary, people are becoming greedy towards new articles, feeling of completeness has vanished. The competition of having latest things has increased between near and dears.
To conclude the things, considering the pros and cons of the more and more shopping, individual should apply his mind and then only go forward for purchase of new items and not just a leisure activity.
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Suggestion: Hence,
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Suggestion: possesses
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Suggestion: having the latest
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...items and not just a leisure activity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, then, well, for example, in addition, as well as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1681.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.125 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77711438225 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59756097561 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 530.1 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5799096787 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.066666667 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8666666667 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193089050756 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0600120413632 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0625974383322 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0986482743616 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0446878239369 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.