The illustrations show how chocolate is produced.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The flowchart illustrates the steps in the process of chocolate production.
Overall, there are ten stages in how chocolate is produced, beginning with the collection of pods from cacao trees and ending with the production of liquid chocolate.
First, cacao trees, which are grown in South America, Africa and Indonesia, bear ripe red pods, and these are then harvested and the white cocoa beans inside them are collected. Next, the beans are fermented before being spread to dry in the sun.
At the fifth stage, the dried beans are put into sacks, ready for the next step which is transportation by train, lorry or ship. The sacks are taken to the factory, where the beans are roasted at a very high temperature of 350 degrees. After roasting, the beans are then crushed and the outer shells are removed, Finally, the inner part of the beans is pressed to produce liquid chocolate, and the process is complete.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...oduced, beginning with the collection of pods from cacao trees and ending with th...
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...ica, Africa and Indonesia, bear ripe red pods, and these are then harvested and t...
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...a beans inside them are collected. Next, the beans are fermented before being spr...
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... before being spread to dry in the sun. At the fifth stage, the dried beans are ...
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... sacks, ready for the next step which is transportation by train, lorry or ship. ...
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...aken to the factory, where the beans are roasted at a very high temperature of 35...
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...ter roasting, the beans are then crushed and the outer shells are removed, Finall...
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... part of the beans is pressed to produce liquid chocolate, and the process is com...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 759.0 965.302439024 79% => OK
No of words: 156.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86538461538 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46816515867 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634615384615 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 229.5 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5049871088 43.030603864 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.428571429 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2857142857 22.9334400587 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0693582042758 0.215688989381 32% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.036017430166 0.103423049105 35% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0410635616805 0.0843802449381 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0544393155528 0.15604864568 35% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0441804507075 0.0819641961636 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.2329268293 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.