How much screen time is too much for kids?
In this digital age, for more than 90% of families, parents and children have launched a "protracted war" without gunpowder smoke against restrictions on the use of electronic devices .Based on the about of report ,I have gotten the main idea of some experts .There is no absolute correlation between the limitation of device use and children’s well-being .We are supposed to pay more attention to what children are watching ,playing and reading and ensure that the content is high-quality ,age-appropriate and safe .Besides ,join them as much as possible .
Everything has its two sides . It is undeniable that this restriction of parents, in principle, is conducive to helping children balance their entertainment life and study. Obviously, learning is more important than the two .According to Brewer’s view ,parents should join in with their kids rather than limit their media consumptions . With the participation of parents, in addition to controlling the time children use electronic products, it can also affect their way of thinking and make them gradually become self-discipline and self-control. Children can also enhance their physical quality .
Digital devices exist everywhere in our daily life and to a great extent ,we can’t avoid using them if we want to be successful to complete something .Moreover ,It is impossible for parents to limit their kid’s media consumption forever .As a result ,participating and keeping exposure safe are the best way to deal with the problem like this .
To sum up ,Brewer’s view is brilliant and rational ,due to the children’s rebellious psychology ,I can’t agree more that we need to respect everyone when we are going to resolve contradictions .From where I stand ,as a college student ,actually we prefer to accept parent’s participation rather than be controlled by them .It is suggested that parents should adopt a rational and practical way to help children overcome their addiction to the Internet, rather than blindly restrict them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, if, moreover, so, well, in addition, as a result, to sum up, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1702.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3690851735 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13073670042 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605678233438 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 20.2975951904 192% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 187.245827724 49.4020404114 379% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 212.75 106.682146367 199% => OK
Words per sentence: 39.625 20.7667163134 191% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.875 7.06120827912 182% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 39.0 5.01903807615 777% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0581229859471 0.244688304435 24% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0219355079069 0.084324248473 26% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0235776776945 0.0667982634062 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0357910531873 0.151304729494 24% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0230559021531 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.7 13.0946893788 181% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.89 50.2224549098 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 11.3001002004 164% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.46 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.2 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.6 10.1190380762 174% => OK
text_standard: 24.0 10.7795591182 223% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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