Competitiveness is a positive quality for people in most societies. How does competitiveness affect individuals? Is it a positive or negative trend?
Nowadays, people of various societies believe that being a competitive personality is a must to survive in the modern world. In this essay, we will discuss how it affects any person. Also, whether it is beneficial in the long term or just a random thing.
On the first hand, In this rapidly changing civilization, we humans have witnessed the history and the present. Further, one thing we believe in is each and everything has to bring some or the other change in themselves to sustain. For instance, people working in any industry will have to update themselves from time to time to be competitive amongst the others. Secondly, as the infrastructure around us has developed all the things are now based on technology and to be able to fit in the current society, one has to compete with the others. Last but not least, challenging people always stay in demand and maintain a good lifestyle.
On the other hand, This type of development will always benefit the people as well as the nation as a whole. Any individual fulfilling the requirements may receive benefits in the form of better jobs or a senior position in the company. For example, an interviewer will always hire a candidate who is up to date with the respective trend and familiar with all the latest technology that the position demands; and, not with someone who knows everything but in the present that knowledge is outdated.
To conclude my essay, I would say that life is all about competing with the world to survive. Those who keep focusing on the changes going around can grow and fulfill their needs. In the end, If life is easy then the person is not competing.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 89, Rule ID: MUST_HAVE_TO[1]
Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
...at being a competitive personality is a must to survive in the modern world. In this es...
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Line 3, column 314, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'time to'.
Suggestion: time to
...try will have to update themselves from time to time to be competitive amongst the others. Seco...
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Line 3, column 378, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding infrastructure'?
Suggestion: the surrounding infrastructure
...titive amongst the others. Secondly, as the infrastructure around us has developed all the things are now ba...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, well, as to, for example, for instance, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1362.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7456445993 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67352531683 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.9013150867 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.2857142857 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.85714285714 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158735846439 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0446646714773 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530183545975 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0853597563955 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0573008263146 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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