The key to solving the environmental problem is simple： the present generation is willing to accept a less comfortable life for the sake of the future generation. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Indubitably, environmental hazards have been a major issue as they can be seen from the deteriorating effects of life on earth. However, there is a resolution to such a problem which can be encountered by leading a normal lifestyle instead of luxurious living. And, I firmly concur that lifestyle changes are certainly important for the betterment of future generations.
To begin with, changes in daily routine life may not be onerous. For instance, the use of plastics has been banned by the government in most countries because they do not have a proper means to recycle the waste which is produced by plastics. Therefore, the ministry has come up with an alternative method to use paper and cloth bags that have changed living with no reduction in comfort. Moreover, the announcement made by the national leaders to decline the effects of deforestation which used for making paper as people are advised to avoid the wastage of paper. This initiative to stop cutting more trees helps us to save the green spaces which in turn would benefit the environmental conditions.
Furthermore, the authority has also asked people to reduce the use of energy. In other words, switching off the lights when not necessary and unplugging the chargers after use. This practice is not only good for pockets but also better for the environment natural resources from which energy comes such as water. Lastly, the emission of greenhouse gases due to heavy usage of automobiles is also a concern which could be easily solved by decreasing the use of private vehicles on roads and adapting the methods of public transport in our daily lives.
In conclusion, I personally agree that some of the changes above in today's lifestyle may be a tough call for individuals, but I assure that it will improve the lifestyle of current generation without making any compromise on their comfort zone.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 40, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, lastly, may, moreover, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1567.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00638977636 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79986336452 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613418530351 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.3191163995 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.538461538 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0769230769 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9230769231 7.06120827912 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125675136371 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0390276907449 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0327853041761 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0780206446334 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0349989640261 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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