A letter to my idol
Dear Miss Taylor Swift,
Let me introduce myself first. My name is Tristan and I am from Can Tho city, Vietnam. I am writing you this letter because I want you to know that you are the person who has inspired me a lot since the last 5 years up to now.
There are many aspects which makes me get inspired by you. So, here are some of them. For being one of the most successful singers, song-writers of all time, you became an admirable and powerful artist that we love. For us, the melody, lyrics and music you created is so creative, honest, intimate and sensual at the same time. I remember the first time I listened to your songs, they were all catchy and then I found out the meaning of the lyrics, it blew my mind off. That was one of the reasons made me like to learn English more and more. In addition, you are not only an artist who just makes music, but also a bussiness woman and a chance-catcher who makes good and wise strategies. Every move you choose in your career has its own reasons, and it must take you a lot of time and effort to make it perfect.
You are really a role model for this generation, as some articles say. Years by years, you fight for human rights, especially for women. As a female artist, it is for sure that everything you have got through is unimaginable. Men have always been seen as harder workers and more worthy of praise and acceptance by everyone than women, not only in the music industry, but almost fields in this life. However, you proved us that it was wrong. You proved women could do anything men could do, even better than them. No one can believe that a female artist like you can make big companies such as Apple Music and Spotify change their mind of paying artists the money they deserve, for their music. You also make a big mark for LGBT+ community by struggling for their rights. You help the poor in the US, support the COVID-19 health care organizations and so on. That makes you special and everyone should be another Taylor Swift in their life.
Despite being famous and successful, you don’t look down on other people around you. You love your fans. You care for your family, your friends. You want to connect with many people and listen to their stories as much as you could. Not like some other artists, you don’t see new young artists as a danger or a competitor for your career. You help and give them chances to build up their music career by their own talent. That is very nice and beautiful of you to do all those things not only for your own, but also for the future of music.
It will take me a lot of time to express all of my admire to you, Miss Swift. You did excellent jobs. You had been through some bad times, but afterward you come back stronger and stronger than ever. You made good values for the society and people around you. Yet the best thing is that you keep doing those things until now, after over 15 years in your career. I believe that you will keep doing more great things in the future, make this life a better place and inspire more and more people.
Thank you so much for reading my letter, and I hope you will stay good and maybe we can meet each other in person someday if I have a chance.
One of your fans (Swifties),
Tristan
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 146, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...You care for your family, your friends. You want to connect with many people and li...
^^^
Line 11, column 201, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...e back stronger and stronger than ever. You made good values for the society and pe...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, may, really, so, then, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 31.0 10.4138276553 298% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 105.0 24.0651302605 436% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2641.0 1615.20841683 164% => OK
No of words: 610.0 315.596192385 193% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.32950819672 5.12529762239 84% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.96972615649 4.20363070211 118% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.10470927416 2.80592935109 75% => OK
Unique words: 305.0 176.041082164 173% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 813.6 506.74238477 161% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 29.0 5.43587174349 533% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 0.809619238477 865% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 36.0 16.0721442886 224% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.6074534757 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.3611111111 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9444444444 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.22222222222 7.06120827912 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.38176352705 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 27.0 8.67935871743 311% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0416787322051 0.244688304435 17% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0135337298255 0.084324248473 16% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0353800350238 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0380129491357 0.151304729494 25% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0533050345944 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 13.0946893788 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 50.2224549098 161% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 11.3001002004 53% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.54 12.4159519038 61% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.71 8.58950901804 78% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 10.7795591182 56% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 0.67 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 146, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...You care for your family, your friends. You want to connect with many people and li...
^^^
Line 11, column 201, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...e back stronger and stronger than ever. You made good values for the society and pe...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, may, really, so, then, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 31.0 10.4138276553 298% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 105.0 24.0651302605 436% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2641.0 1615.20841683 164% => OK
No of words: 610.0 315.596192385 193% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.32950819672 5.12529762239 84% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.96972615649 4.20363070211 118% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.10470927416 2.80592935109 75% => OK
Unique words: 305.0 176.041082164 173% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 813.6 506.74238477 161% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 29.0 5.43587174349 533% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 0.809619238477 865% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 36.0 16.0721442886 224% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.6074534757 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.3611111111 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9444444444 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.22222222222 7.06120827912 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.38176352705 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 27.0 8.67935871743 311% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0416787322051 0.244688304435 17% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0135337298255 0.084324248473 16% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0353800350238 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0380129491357 0.151304729494 25% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0533050345944 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 13.0946893788 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 50.2224549098 161% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 11.3001002004 53% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.54 12.4159519038 61% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.71 8.58950901804 78% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 10.7795591182 56% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 0.67 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.