Some parents buy their children a large number of toys to play with . What are the advantages and disadvantages for the child of having a large number of toys.
Nowadays, children have a chance to receive toys from their parents by many methods, so this phenomenon can bring many benefits for children. However, we should think about some drawbacks which children must face because of having many toys.
On the one hand, there are many positive aspects of having many toys brought up to children. First, it is easy for any one of them to become addicted to technology devices, so having any kind of toys can help them keep away from these devices to have a meaningful life. For instance, after receiving a pack of Lego puzzles, I hear the news that my cousin reduced his free time playing games on my aunt's smartphone. Moreover, having many toys may have a good chance for them to increase their personalities if they spend a particular time playing with it. Take rubik for example. Playing it can help most of them raise their imagination and IQ rate.
On the other hand, it has some drawbacks that children may face when having many toys, and one of them is wasting parents' money. In fact, most parents will spend their budget to satisfy their offspring's demand if they feel that the children's need is necessary. But when some children don't protect their toys bought by their parents, it makes them suppose that buying these items can lead to money wastage. Another drawback is that when some parents refuse to buy many toys for their children, it creates not only a conflict between parents and children, but also disobeys from any child. For instance, one of the symbols associated with the disobey of children is that they often steal their parents' money to buy some items of their own.
To conclude, owning a lot of toys can bring up both pros and cons for children. However, they should think about their circumstances on family finances before offering parents to buy any one kind of toys.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, for example, for instance, in fact, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1542.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78881987578 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3220345498 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506211180124 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.6160340533 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.8 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4666666667 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46666666667 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.339602936751 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133951691474 0.084324248473 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0672894210779 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219340568553 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0588651553368 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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