Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
People today spend too much money on clothing to improve their appearance
The clothing industry and retail business are in continuous thriving nowadays. People nowadays are more concerned about their appearance more than ever. I strongly believe that people today spend a lot of money to look better. I feel this way for several reasons, Which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, In current days people judge each other by the way they look. It became part of the essential criteria to define a human. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. Last month I applied for a dental assistant job at a clinic near my house. So I went to the interview wearing a suit that I purchased from an average-class shop store. Unfortunately, I did not get accepted to the job and the clinic manager made it clear to me that she did not like my normal suit.
A week later I purchased an expensive bran suit from a luxurious shop in the mall. So I went back again to the clinic. Surprisingly, the manager treated me in utterly different manners and offered me the job with a higher salary. For that reason, I believe spending more money helped me in my job and I got treated differently when I was wearing better clothes.
Secondly, the effects of social media and celebrities have affected the influenced more people to spend money on their clothes. For instance, Instagram models tend to wear all these extravagant brand designs. By wearing these clothes and posting their pictures on social media. A lot of teenagers especially girls are affected and their favorite celebrities. So they imitate what they do and wear in the hope to become like them in the future. I remember one model on Facebook called sally had advertised for a Gucci bag. The very next week all the bad with the same designs were sold out.
To sum up, I believe that people nowadays actually spend too much money in order to look better and to feel better about themselves. Because they are being judged by their appearance. In addition, they love to follow their role models and .
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 134, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...er and to feel better about themselves. Because they are being judged by their appearan...
^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 239, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...hey love to follow their role models and .
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, if, look, second, secondly, so, for instance, i feel, in addition, by the way, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1653.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 353.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68271954674 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58336847007 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560906515581 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.7576512365 48.9658058833 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 68.875 100.406767564 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7083333333 20.6045352989 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.70833333333 5.45110844103 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.88709677419 266% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21452580054 0.236089414692 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0525383976465 0.076458572812 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0571856320533 0.0737576698707 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123081956191 0.150856017488 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0740602375486 0.0645574589148 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 11.7677419355 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.27 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 10.002688172 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 134, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...er and to feel better about themselves. Because they are being judged by their appearan...
^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 239, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...hey love to follow their role models and .
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, if, look, second, secondly, so, for instance, i feel, in addition, by the way, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1653.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 353.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68271954674 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58336847007 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560906515581 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.7576512365 48.9658058833 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 68.875 100.406767564 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7083333333 20.6045352989 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.70833333333 5.45110844103 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.88709677419 266% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21452580054 0.236089414692 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0525383976465 0.076458572812 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0571856320533 0.0737576698707 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123081956191 0.150856017488 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0740602375486 0.0645574589148 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 11.7677419355 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.27 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 10.002688172 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.