Children should do organized activities in their free time while others believe children should be free to do what they want. Discuss both views and give your opinion?
Children should do arrange action in their free time. While others believe children should be acquit to do what they want. This essay will examine both sides of the argument before a reasoned is drawn.
Admittedly, there are some arguments in favor of children should do organized activities in free time. First, organized activities are believed create cohesion in work or study. This cohesion support, presumably not only helps children playing together but also removes through organized activities. Second, arrange activities would probably result in a solid team, helping children achieve great goals together. In fact, it is acknowledged arrange activities is the easiest way to make children socialize and study better.
Nevertheless, the resultant problems would be far more significant than the minor benefits once children should do organized activities in free time. First, organizing activities is synonymous with greatness of children. Children have to follow the same schedule they can’t do they want. Now, children are time controlled by their parents so they don’t have any freedom. Second, arrange activities children don’t have real free time because they do the same schedule like a robot. This is the biggest pressure children have to organize activities. It, instead, would be a more organized activities viable option if children used correctly.
I was discussed both views. In my opinion, children should do they want in free time. Everyone are all time. In the future, I hope children will be more comfortable with their lives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, nevertheless, second, so, while, in fact, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1317.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 244.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39754098361 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67736525997 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55737704918 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.812272261 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.3157894737 106.682146367 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.8421052632 20.7667163134 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.05263157895 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.605820104205 0.244688304435 248% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.211363945967 0.084324248473 251% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.164945827398 0.0667982634062 247% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.429279867442 0.151304729494 284% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0965258761882 0.056905535591 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.84 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.2 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.15 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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