Technology has made children less creative than they were in the past.
Since the 19th Century, technological advancement has made human life; easy and comfortable. it is also helping children, by providing different learning platforms. However, everything has its own pros and cons. In the same way, technology also has a negative impact on people. Therefore, I believe that somewhere technology is also affecting the creativity of children. I will expound on this in the following passage.
To begin with, technology has come up with different virtual video games which are quite impressive and children are fond of these, nowadays. but, they have become so addictive that they prefer to play online games over physical activity. For instance, When I was young, I used to go to play outside with my friend who lives nearby. this was not only helping me to maintain physical health but also I was making new friends. Interaction with other children was helping me to enhance my creativity by utilizing it while playing outdoor games. but today, children are busy playing an online games, so addictive to accomplish the goal and create the highest record in the virtual world. Although in this way, children are also using their mind or intellect, it is constrained to one zone. Thus, I see that technology has influenced the creativity of children.
Next, technology has also provided many different options for the entertainment of humans; movie app and tiktok app. In today's world, most of the time, people prefer to utilize their spare time either by watching movies or scrolling on tiktok, watching reels. this has also affected children as well. today, Kids of year 5 or younger are making videos on tiktok and getting viral for their cuteness. I found that this kind of entertainment has the immensely affected capability of the youngster. Instead of reading booking, drawing painting, and solving puzzle games, they are badly indulging in making reels on tiktok.
In conclusion, I strongly feel that technology has lessened the creativity of children than it was in the past because they are busy playing online games and making a short film on the internet
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, to begin with, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1763.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 346.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09537572254 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70428353796 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560693641618 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 544.5 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.0311656481 48.9658058833 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.9523809524 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4761904762 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.45110844103 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252755011896 0.236089414692 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0749088088573 0.076458572812 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0846591712815 0.0737576698707 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175279576177 0.150856017488 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0874915856721 0.0645574589148 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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