Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Honesty is the best policy. In order to live a peaceful and happy family life speaking truth is the key. Some people are inclined toward the attitude that, always saying truth is not a better option because it can loose the tie of the relation, whereas, others hold different perspective. No one can deny that there are both positive and negative aspects of telling truth. I personally, though, believe that sincerity in necessary no matter what happens in life. In the following essay, I intend to put forth my points and reasons for support.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that life is unpredictable and we should work for the betterment. The base of living happy depends on the relationships that we have around which are like thread and easily breakable just by one lie. To exemplify, one of my friend get married and late she came to know her husband was in love with other girl. This truth comes to display when his ex-girlfriend called me and yell at me and claimed for my husband. However, I got angry and asked him and he answered all my question with honesty. As a result, I forgave him and still spending our lives happily. Therefore, this example illustrates the importance of rightness.
Secondly, in order to hide a correctness of anything thousands of lies are required. The lies can never save a person forever because at any time it can come up in front. I have to admit that my opinion on this matter has been profoundly influenced by my own personal experience. When I was in school my friend called me and wants me to cover her for a lie and unfortunately I agreed. My friend parents called me for the time I was thinking that she is save now. Meanwhile, her parents came at my home and made me shocked. Moreover, my lies saved her just for a time and I was trapped in between my lies and had to tell the truth. The moments were so embarrassing for me so I decided never to lie again. Thus, this example taught me that whenever life becomes hard make it easy by saying right things.
In the light of the reasons mentioned, I strongly believe that the life is a gift of God make it cheerful not complicated. Therefore, I recommended considering these reasons before making a choice.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: lose
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, thus, whereas, while, as a result, to tell the truth
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 62.0 43.0788530466 144% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1820.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 400.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.472135955 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63415546238 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 583.2 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.5025599172 48.9658058833 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.8333333333 100.406767564 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6666666667 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.08333333333 5.45110844103 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106475347716 0.236089414692 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.030091145116 0.076458572812 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0330285706949 0.0737576698707 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0689306010191 0.150856017488 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0342205727391 0.0645574589148 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.81 10.9000537634 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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