Advertising has become an inevitable part of our lives. Some people believe that it is a positive aspect of our lives while others are of opposite belief. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
The importance of advertisement in our life, which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial while others are reject this notion. The substantial influence of this trend has sparked the controversy over the potential impact in recent years. In my opinion the both proposition appears to be more rational. This essay will further elaborate my views for favouring the positive and negative impact of this trend and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
Analysing the statement and explaining further, the first and the foremost reason behind this is that it can helps to make relationship between public and organizations by with people can easily access about the new products of a firm. Another striking benefit in this regard is that with the help of advertising, the organisational growth become more accurate and stable because advertising is a method that spread information in a formal way to public about products to individuals with more clarityand elaboration. Categorically discussion, it cannot be ignored that the main reason behind this is that if demand increases than supply also inclines. So this method is very crucial to implement the demand of individual. For example, in year 2002, naptol which is India's biggest shopping center, achieved less success. But, in year 2008, with proper utilization of advertising it become no 1 shopping center where crores of people got more data about naptol and its each and every product, which increase its marketing.
Probing ahead, one of the main underlying reasons stems from the fact is that some companies misused the advertisement , they promote addiction products like as tobacco, cigarettes, alcohol and other other things with the help of advertisement to incline the sell but it is injurious for health so people should not use it . Moving further, it is pertinent to mentioned that companies do not provide exact quality of products which they shown in advertisement because they only show the unreal products and attract public toward them that’s why, usually people change their mind to buy new things rather then, those which they use on daily basis because they trust on advertisement. Apart from the reasons Mentioned above it can be clearly stated why some people are against of this trend.
The recapitulate, according to the argument aforementioned above, one can reach to a conclusion that the benefits of advertisements are indeed too great to ignore.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, then, thus, while, apart from, as to, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2100.0 1615.20841683 130% => OK
No of words: 402.0 315.596192385 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22388059701 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47771567384 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86432238261 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 176.041082164 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572139303483 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 653.4 506.74238477 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 90.0903174937 49.4020404114 182% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.0 106.682146367 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.7142857143 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123155929194 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0424644706671 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0452489850608 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0717008911532 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0420963939726 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.59 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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