Some people think that money is one of the most essential factors in promoting happiness. Do you think people can be happy without much money. what other factors contribute towards happiness?
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Why some people think that leisure activities for children should be desgined by parents, others believe that they are allowed to be free to do whatever they incline.This essay will discuss both views and give my opinion.
On the one hand, children need to have a certain degree of freedom when choosing their leisure activities so that it enables them to develop their unique talents. Independently planning free time activites can gives children a sense of autonomy. they will have chance to explore the world through the choices they make. For example, while those who are sociable and energetic may opt for team sports like football, badminton,volleyball,.. the more curious and introverted ones may prefer reading or drawing.Thus, the child can feel that they have a say in their course of development, which can greatly boost their confidence and self-esteem.
On the other hand, parents are well-positioned to decide on the most productive leisure activities To a certain extent, parents are able to organize and regulate children’s activities to ensure that their children do not become spoiled. Furthermore, parents know what is best for their children in terms of growing up so the youngster can gain several valuable experiences to enhance their confidence levels.For instance, by following professional instructions, parents can organize an effective camping session, simultaneously, ensure safety and an educational experience for their children.
Inconclusion, both sides of this issue have indisputable aspects. still, I am firmly convinced that although children should have their own choice in terms of what activities to join in, parents should still have some control over these activities.
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- Some people say free time activities for children should be organized by parents Others say that children should be free to choose what they do in their free time Discuss both views and give your opinion 78
- Some people say free time activities for children should be organized by parents Others say that children should be free to choose what they do in their free time Discuss both views and give your opinion 85
- Some people think that money is one of the most essential factors in promoting happiness Do you think people can be happy without much money what other factors contribute towards happiness 89
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, may, so, still, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1467.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49438202247 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11565467794 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621722846442 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 86.6657948674 49.4020404114 175% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.7 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.2 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0868476435428 0.244688304435 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0334937858736 0.084324248473 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0389096970806 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.062515659373 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0460332631127 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 13.0946893788 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.86 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.