One problem faced by almost every large city is traffic congestion? What do you think the causes are? What solutions can you suggest?
Traffic congestion in almost every large city, which has escalated in recent years, has engendered some valid concerns. I opine that this trend is driven by several reasons and some viable solutions can be implemented to address this issue.
There are many underlying reasons why traffic jam happens in each almost city. One of the prominent reasons for this problem is the overcrowded population. This is because professional and educational opportunities have the propensity for luring people to migrate to the cities, leading to the fact that city residents have their own private vehicles that cause too much traffic on the roads and streets, especially in rush hours. Another factor leading to this situation is the poor quality of public transportation. As public transport is low quality and overcrowded so people need to wait for long hours, hence, almost all people prefer to use their own private vehicles.
In truth, some imperative measures ought to be administered to resolve these prospective issues. First and foremost, it is crucial that factories and industrial areas should be highly recommended for transfer to rural and countryside which prevent the increase in the number of citizens. It is also imperative that governments should initiate enhancing transportation infrastructures and encouraging people to use public transport to remedy the issue of congestion. Besides, people should raise their awareness of this current issue so that they can limit using their own cars as less as possible.
In conclusion, traffic jams in all big cities may stem from various underlying factors, and the proposed solutions can be executed to reverse the trend.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, hence, may, so, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1423.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39015151515 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88871643151 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602272727273 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.3268784509 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.583333333 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 7.06120827912 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128331966296 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0486402396315 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0494944914595 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.087614016842 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0493662181241 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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