Many manufactured food and drink products contain high level of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugar products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar.
Do you agree or disagree?
Sugary beverages, refreshments and foodstuffs lead to a lot of health-related diseases. In order to stimulate public to eat and drink less sugar products, there should be more increased prices on them. This essay totally agrees with this idea because not all people are affordable to spend more for expensive food as well as drinks that contained of great amount of sugar, and businesses also will start servicing less sugary products to avoid high prices.
Encouraging people to buy less sugar and helping them to get rid of some health issues due to sugary products can be reached by increased prices on such items, because a big part of the population in the world have average salary. When products which have a lot of sugar are pricy, poor and middle-class people avoid to consume them since they have to think about also other living expenses. Therefore, high-prices for sugary items may lead to discourage people to eat more sugar and to have health problems. For example, the price of sugar and other sugary products is increased every year in Uzbekistan, and less people have obesity and diabetes now.
Another reason why sugary meals and drinks should be expensive is the fact that restaurants, cafes will start servicing less sugary products to have enough profit. That is to say that such businesses always want to purchase cheap half-finished goods and reselling them for high prices after making ready it to consume. As a result, we may even see more healthy foods and drinks which have less sugar or zero sugar on menus which does not cause any diseases. For instance, BBC studies proves that people would like to have more healthy food and drinks at restaurants when they sugary ones require more money.
In conclusion, not all people do not want to spend on sugary foodstuffs and drinks and businesses also avoid such goods if only they are expensive, therefore, I believe that such products should be made more pricy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 312, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'avoid consuming'.
Suggestion: avoid consuming
...are pricy, poor and middle-class people avoid to consume them since they have to think about als...
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Line 3, column 611, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun people is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...increased every year in Uzbekistan, and less people have obesity and diabetes now. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1616.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91185410334 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48881423256 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.507598784195 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.4911541471 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.666666667 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4166666667 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.75 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.368781113929 0.244688304435 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15013546591 0.084324248473 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0725401996841 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.241536722785 0.151304729494 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0514697046511 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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