Some people think that parents should teach their children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the best place to learn this.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is argued that children can gain understating of being a good person in a community from their parents, while others assume that school is the greatest place for that. I think that parents feel responsible about their children’s future role and reputation in society, but schools can better place to educate this due to some specific subjects and well-experienced teachers.
Some reckon that parents care more about their children than anyone so that they can explain to their children how to be a good people in society. That is to say that children are the most important people as well as mirrors of their parents, showing what happens around them that’s why many parents do not want to have a bad image of their family among the public. For example, in Uzbekistan, parents always explain to their children from an early age that they need to help others who are in trouble. However, I think that not all parents do not know how to be really good members of the public, therefore, they cannot teach their children well enough.
Others suppose that well-educated teachers, some specific subjects, some rules of the school can be the best atmosphere for children to understand how to be a good member of society. In other words, children learn how to obey rules, how to act in public places, and how to respect others’ opinions which are the important rules of society at school. For example, most schools have sociology as a subject that gives brief knowledge of social action as well as social behavior. For that reason, I consider that schools are the best place to learn how to be a good part of society.
In conclusion, parents can train their children how to be good people in the community because of their strong care, but I believe that school provides more accurate knowledge and examples.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, really, so, therefore, well, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, as well as, in other words, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 18.0 7.30460921844 246% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1502.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79872204473 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52962925764 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.482428115016 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 33.8743424199 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.545454545 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4545454545 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0909090909 7.06120827912 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.438107848572 0.244688304435 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.187830970849 0.084324248473 223% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0699598533337 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.274931197323 0.151304729494 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0366774759942 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 11.3001002004 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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