For sucess in school and work the ability to adapt or adjust to a changing condition or circumstance is more important than have in excellent knowledge of a job or a field of study Do you agree or disageee
With the state-of-the-art technology fast growing, the society become more and more various, which is making people change their ideas and switch their behaviors. One of the obvious examples, thinking, people thought that having plenty of knowledge was the most important factor for students to their schools and their vocations in the past. Nowadays, people who in order to overcome abundantly different problems and adapt bountifully novel things require the ability of resilience more than the past. Consequently, in my opinion, the ability of adjusting to innovations is inevitable in this time.
First and foremost, conditions have become diverse types during the development of society, and people needs to gradually improve own skills to solve multiple circumstances and achieve the tasks. So, the movement is expecting to useful for learning different kinds of approaches. However, if you only studied or work all day, you would not have any ideas when you met conditions, because the knowledge is lifeless, the skill that you learn from you settling hampers is vivid. Hence, you should learn not only from the textbook but also in your experience that you had in your university, internship and daily to deal with hinders of fickle conditions.
Secondly, more and more inventions are invented, which means new knowledge rapidly appearing. Meanwhile, people who must quickly absorb considerable ideas and knowledge will be significant attitude that is nourished in your growth process when you touched and surmounted something you haven’t occurred. Nevertheless, did people only study from textbooks and university courses, they would compel to constrict in fade thought, which let them can’t be progressive. Undoubtedly, the ability of resilience can help people to perfectly finish work or smoothly complete the academic.
To conclude, considering both the diverse conditions and the cutting-edge innovations, I am staunchly convinced that getting the ability to adapt to changing circumstances is more essential than requiring well knowledge.
- Some people believe that sharing good times with friends could make friendship stronger Others think sharing problems with their friends and talking about problems could make their friendship stronger Which one do you agree with 77
- For sucess in school and work the ability to adapt or adjust to a changing condition or circumstance is more important than have in excellent knowledge of a job or a field of study Do you agree or disageee 76
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...innovations is inevitable in this time. First and foremost, conditions have beco...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, hence, however, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, well, while, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1755.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 314.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.58917197452 4.8611393121 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9442136905 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608280254777 0.524837075471 116% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.39587912 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.0 100.406767564 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1538461538 20.6045352989 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.76923076923 5.45110844103 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289281226586 0.236089414692 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0887408561212 0.076458572812 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0479226235378 0.0737576698707 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162830621851 0.150856017488 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0291440697206 0.0645574589148 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 11.7677419355 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 58.1214874552 67% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.44 10.9000537634 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.01818996416 119% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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