The graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries.
The line graph compares global water usage of three sectors, namely agriculture, industry, and domestics. The table shows water consumed by two different countries in the year 2000.
It is clear that agriculture used the most water among three sectors. Also, Brazil consumed much more water than Democratic Republic of Congo.
According to the line graph, agriculture is the primary source of global water use among three sectors and its figure increased dramatically from 500 in 1990 to 3000 in 2000. The equivalent figures for both industrial use and domestic use remained stable between 1990 to 1950. Meanwhile, both of them witnessed an increase to 1500 and 500 respectively over the following four years.
We could see that the amount of population, irrigated land and water consumption per person in Brazil overtook those figures of Congo in 2000. The amount of Brazilian population was over 30 times as large as that of Congo. Similarly, their water consumption per person was 359 m^3 and 8 m^3, respectively. A more huge gap existed in the amount of irrigated land and there was 26500 km^2 land which is irrigated in Brazil, while only 100 km^2 in Congo.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 453, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n Brazil, while only 100 km^2 in Congo.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, similarly, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 980.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 194.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05154639175 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65150951538 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603092783505 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 293.4 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.3476553254 43.030603864 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.0909090909 112.824112599 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6363636364 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.72727272727 5.23603664747 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256076336048 0.215688989381 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105238222708 0.103423049105 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0934152706258 0.0843802449381 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168104605358 0.15604864568 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0872898902089 0.0819641961636 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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