In many parts of the world there is continuous coverage of sport on television. Some people believe this discourages the young from taking part in any sport themselves.
Most countries in the world keep going performance of sport on TV. Many individuals consider that this stops teenagers from participating in any kind of sport types. I don't approve of this statement because being sport on television may not give a negative influence on the young generation, instead of it, it can help the youth to encourage to sport. And also, there can be unnecessary programs on TV so sport shows may be acceptable ones.
Firstly, performing sport on TV channels can be a positive effect on teenagers' aim to sport. For instance, when young children watch sport shows on TV then they can appear a desire for sport because they are tend to imitate to others in this age. For this reason, I find out watching sport on TV is useful for them.
Secondly, nowadays we can see variety of TV shows and programs which all of them are not worth watching since being sport channels or programs is more preferable than others.
Thirdly, some youngesters can have a good-natured sensation for everything so when they watch the defeat of sport game, they can change their own opinions about sport and give up taking part sports.
In conlusion, although they are some drawbacks, I argue that majority countries should continuous coverage of sport on television because it can be important for others.
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- The bar chart below gives information about the percentage of population living in the urban areas in the different parts of the world
- In many parts of the world there is continuous coverage of sport on television Some people believe this discourages the young from taking part in any sport themselves 56
- The bar chart below gives information about the percentage of population living in the urban areas in the different parts of the world
- The bar chart below gives information about the percentage of population living in urban areas in different parts of the world
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 169, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...icipating in any kind of sport types. I dont approve of this statement because being...
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Line 1, column 343, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'sporting'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'encourage' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: sporting
... it, it can help the youth to encourage to sport. And also, there can be unnecessary pro...
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Line 2, column 208, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'tended'.
Suggestion: tended
...ear a desire for sport because they are tend to imitate to others in this age. For t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, may, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, for instance, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1085.0 1615.20841683 67% => OK
No of words: 224.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84375 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66319619982 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 323.1 506.74238477 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7841162675 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.5 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.2 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296315592645 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133114142729 0.084324248473 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532205350793 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161735272157 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0681696794791 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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