Live sports coverage on television has been one of most entertaining programs for the young in recent years. Many believe that this trend is a drawback for teenagers to participate in sport matches themselves. In this essay, I discuss this popular belief and explain why I completely disagree.
On the one hand, many individuals take the notion that when the young boys and girls can enjoy the excitement of watching games via TV in comfort of the house, they will not bother themselves to participate in sport events which require lots of physical effort and dedication. Moreover, following sports matches and news related to them makes our youngsters spend an immense amount of their time in front of the televisions which make them live a lazy lifestyle and keeps them away from physical practices. A survey conducted by Oxford University Press reported that, children spend 20 % more time at home in comparison with children who were born before the advent of Television.
On the other hand, I take the view that watching competitions could be the driving force to convince our kids to select a sport to play. Firstly, they get to know different sports that are famous all around the world and they can choose their favourite activity among them. Secondly, successful sports persons are introduced to them as a role model, so they try to take active roles in sports in order that they can make a successful career and gain immense fame in the same way as their role models. For instance, Brazilian legend Pele, inspired many soccer players by his dedication and great achievements.
To conclude, although some people argue that watching competitive games on TV may decrease the enthusiasm for physical exercise, I believe that such programs not only do not lessen the will for exercise, but also encourage people to take part in such activities. Programs that are broadcasted on TV, introduce different sports and role models to the audience
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, for instance, in the same way, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1630.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64973371489 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592024539877 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.9315570813 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.833333333 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1666666667 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1666666667 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245854846903 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0826620205927 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0430980912636 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142963907195 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0367884795149 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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