The table below show the results of a survey to find out what members of a city sports club think about the club's activities, facilities and opening hours. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the features, and make any comparisons where relevant.
The table provides the statistical data of a survey to find out what members feel in three different levels such as very satisfied, satisfied and not satisfied for city sports activities (range of activities, club activities and opening hours) by the opposite sex. The most prominent feature is most female members feel very satisfied in opening hours contrast with female members feel in range of activities.
Most male members feel very satisfied in club activities. It is 63% very satisfied and then 27% satisfied and only 10% not satisfied. It is not really contrast with female members in club activities, too. 64% female members feel very satisfied, 22% satisfied and 14% not satisfied. The lowest male members feel not satisfied in range of activities, which is 5% while for female members in opening hours, 3% have complain.
To sum up, the given data indicate that most female members and male members have no complaints and enjoy all activities of city sports (range of activities, club activities and opening hours), only a few feel dissatisfaction.
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The most prominent feature is most female members feel
The most prominent feature is that most female members feel
It is not really contrast with female members in club activities, too
It is not really contrast with female members in club activities, either
3% have complain.
3% of members have complains.
only a few feel dissatisfaction
only a few feel in dissatisfaction
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Attribute Value Ideal
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