The barchart below demonstrates the various types of accommodation chosen by the British when they went on holiday in 2010 Summarize the facts by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant Write at least 150 words

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The barchart below demonstrates the various types of accommodation chosen by the British when they went on holiday in 2010.
Summarize the facts by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.

The barchart represents the proportion of various kinds of accommodation selected during lay-days in 2010 by British people from 4 different regions, including England, Scotland, Wales and Northern Ireland.

From the statistics, it can be inferred that hotel was the best choice for the British to stay in all parts of the UK. Whereas, there was a fluctuation in the percentage among 3 other accommodation types (caravanc camping and self-catering).

In the 2010s, the number of English making up their mind to stay at hotels accounted for the highest percentage and took up about 55%. In addition, Scotland ranked the second, at about 52%, which was followed by Wales and Northern Ireland, with 40% and 45% respectively.

Besides, self-catering was the second best choice among English, Scottish and Welsh. Nevertheless, it was less popular in Northern Ireland. Meanwhile, in Northern Ireland, over 30% of the population spent their holiday time on caravan, which was in preference to self-catering and camping. Specially, the proportion of holidaymakers in this nation staying in self-catering and camping witnessed the same rate, both around 12%.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 88, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: the; IT
...f gross domestic product generated from the IT and Service Industry in the United King...
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Line 5, column 10, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: the; IT
...stry in each year surveyed. In 1992, the IT Industry took up over 6% of GDP, which ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 844.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 180.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68888888889 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57636455514 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572222222222 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 237.6 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.8541582729 43.030603864 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.5 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.625 5.23603664747 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112147701483 0.215688989381 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0568841164475 0.103423049105 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0439642107644 0.0843802449381 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0751919933634 0.15604864568 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.050102582995 0.0819641961636 61% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.2329268293 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 61.2550243902 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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