Essay topics:
You live near a public school. The school has asked residents to help and maintenance of Building and playing areas. Write a letter to principal
Explain why you would like to help
Tell how you can help
Let them know when you are available
You live near a public school. The school has asked residents to help and maintenance of Building and playing areas. Write a letter to principal
Explain why you would like to help
Tell how you can help
Let them know when you are available
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| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2022-06-16 | anonymous24 | 59 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear sir, I am a resident of flowers Street apartm...
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Line 2, column 242, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t to extend my hands for this benevolent Job. The reason of course is responsibil...
^^
Line 2, column 300, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[3]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'understand ameliorating'.
Suggestion: understand ameliorating
...of course is responsibility, one should understand to ameliorate study environment for juveniles. Having...
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Line 4, column 28, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... to help. Mentioning here My standard , actually I am A social worker, therefor...
^^
Line 6, column 63, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...n my schedule to work with you? Being a full time employee I’m unable to execute job on w...
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Line 8, column 8, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o coordinating with your team. Regards
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, besides, if, look, so, therefore, whereas, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 901.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 176.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11931818182 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8621828026 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.727272727273 0.622605031667 117% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.4045544459 44.8134815571 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.1 76.5299724578 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 4.34317383033 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244963670264 0.216113520407 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0783158207864 0.0766984524023 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0838924115613 0.0603063233224 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109170255421 0.12726935374 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0923393353067 0.0580467560999 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 8.37731958763 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 8.71597938144 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 7.59969072165 119% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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