Some young adults want independence from their parents as soon as possible. Other young adults prefer to live with their family for a longer time. Which of these solutions do you think is better? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
In many cultures independence from their parents in at a young age is considered normal. However, in my opinion, I believe it is good for young adults to stay with their parents for a few years in their early adult life before they move-out from their home for the following three reasons.
First of all,most people in their late teens are not completely mature and thoughtful with the decisions they take. When young adults live with their families for a longer time, they can be guided to make good decision or stopped when they are doing something wrong. For example, when we live with our families, we need to follow certain protocols or rituals like eating on time and arriving home before a specific time. Such habits create discipline among late teens which helps them create a better life.
Second of all, staying with your families saves a lot of money. With rising inflation and sky-high property rates, renting a place is getting expensive day by day. During early adulthood people should focus more learning and development like going to college. If people live alone, they may starting worrying about their bills and loose their focus. When we live with our families we get other privileges like food and laundry. This not only saves time, but also a lot of money.
Finally, parents and other family members act as a support to the young members in their family. They are the people who truly love and care for you. Whenever you feel low or need any help they will always be there to support and assist you. For example, I hear a lot of stories when students go off to college, and feel very lonely or stressed. During difficult times people can only turn to their family members for support and comfort so having family members closer to you is a huge advantage during such times.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 13, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , most
...following three reasons. First of all,most people in their late teens are not comp...
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Line 5, column 332, Rule ID: LOOSE_LOSE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
...starting worrying about their bills and loose their focus. When we live with our fami...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, may, second, so, for example, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1488.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 316.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70886075949 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.21600346723 2.67179642975 83% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572784810127 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0647399967 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.5294117647 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5882352941 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.70588235294 5.45110844103 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.363836999728 0.236089414692 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10661527134 0.076458572812 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0850881177157 0.0737576698707 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224147392039 0.150856017488 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0787944880379 0.0645574589148 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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