Some people think that governments should provide subsidies to farmers to produce cheap healthy food . Others think that governments should tax companies producing unhealthy foods . Give your own opinion and examples .
Food , shelter and clothes are the basic needs of human beings in this modern world Presently , some people assert that the financial grants should be given to farmers by the administration to encourage the production of cheap healthy food. By contrast , it is mandatory to impose taxes on companies to refrain the manufacturing of unhealthy food. Here , I would like to account for both sides with my own perception.
There are manifold points to shore up the former view. First and foremost , the production of unhygienic food is on the rise to meet both ends meet. For instance , the farmers have the tendency to use pesticides for maximizing the profits from production since managing resources for farming has been very expensive. Therefore financial assistance must be given to the farmers so that they do not choose bad ways to fulfill their needs . Apart from it , the farmers could be aroused to buy the superior seeds , special equipments and arrange tube wells for the optimum production of fruits and vegetables. On the contrary , others. have conflicting views.
They think that the presence of impure food is the result of money spinning approach of companies. To be specific , companies having intentions to grind their own axis use chemicals , coloring flavors and other toxic elements while preparing products to boost their sales. Hence , tax imposition on companies is more significant to refrain the inferiority of edible things.
From my notion , both aspects have their own significance. Undeniably , farming sector is careless about the quality of the food. However , we can not underestimate the cunning strategies of corporate world. Thus , both companies and farmers should be stimulated for the quality of foods by taking remedial measures.
To recapitulate , it is well said that " health is wealth ". Governments must take proactive steps to preserve the hygienic and nutritional values of foods because comprising with current foods is not out of danger.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, however, if, so, therefore, thus, well, while, apart from, for instance, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.0 229% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 5.60731707317 321% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 33.7804878049 142% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.97073170732 277% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1671.0 965.302439024 173% => OK
No of words: 318.0 196.424390244 162% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25471698113 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 3.73543355544 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83218107572 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 106.607317073 181% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606918238994 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 283.868780488 178% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 8.94146341463 212% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 54.2058250389 43.030603864 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.9473684211 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7368421053 22.9334400587 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.36842105263 5.23603664747 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 20.0 1.69756097561 1178% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 3.70975609756 297% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235985798501 0.215688989381 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.059544676545 0.103423049105 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.063733417637 0.0843802449381 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131041899582 0.15604864568 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0654216888107 0.0819641961636 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 61.2550243902 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 40.7170731707 228% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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