technology is weakening human abilities
Science and Technology have always advanced us, which has made some skills, beliefs and concepts obselete and it is the principle of Science that with discoveries of new things some other things become invalid.
Technology has many benefits and disadvantages as well evaluating them will give us the solution for the increasing depenednce on technology.
Now we are constantly depedend on technology to carry out day to day work. Like we wake up with the sound of alarm, use microwaves for cooking, perform daily works on laptops, computers. This has made of life easy than the earlier generations.
Now banks have become digitalised which has reduced human labour required and is widely accesible to consumer at certain clicks on their phone. Early discovery of computers have resulted in this change and has benifited us a lot.
Manual labour is now thing of past as automation and machines have taken their place. Earlier industries required a large amount of labour force to manufacture products, like textile industries were filled with skilled labour requiring intense training to understand and learn to make a product but now machines have taken over them and thus eradicated the requirement of skilled labour.
A lot of old skills like traditional farming, textile making, clock making is now obselete. But technology has contributed making these tasks easy fast and reliable. So learning these new abilities will help us understand the recent technology and get more out of it. Although we ahve forgotten some old skills and abilities, we have gained some new skills which helps better understand understand the technology and get most out of it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 376, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: understand
...ined some new skills which helps better understand understand the technology and get most out of it. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, thus, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 43.0788530466 46% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1405.0 1977.66487455 71% => OK
No of words: 269.0 407.700716846 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22304832714 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72714018153 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 212.727598566 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579925650558 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 618.680645161 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.5209438488 48.9658058833 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.076923077 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6923076923 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.76923076923 5.45110844103 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119471274799 0.236089414692 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0436736042514 0.076458572812 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0477093951193 0.0737576698707 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0559485030755 0.150856017488 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.036275214717 0.0645574589148 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 11.7677419355 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 58.1214874552 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 10.9000537634 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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