In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
The Internet has played a crucial role in our society for the last decade. As a result, more and more people prefer reading online to original ways, leading many individuals to believe in the neglect of people in newspapers and books in the future. Although this may happen, I think that books and newspapers will still be prioritized by many people.
On the one hand, it is possible that printed newspapers and other sources of paper-based reading can be replaced by online ones. Life tends to be more sophisticated and hectic that many individuals have inadequate time to purchase a book, which causes them to prefer reading the free and available online one. Furthermore, the mobility and convenience of online news allow people to read at any time and places that they want to as they can sit in a bus having a click on a button on their mobile phone to keep updated with the imperative information. Therefore, less people would purchase paper-based books and newspapers causing the elimination of them in the future.
On the other hand, there is ample evidence to claim that many readers find paper-based reading sources indispensable, which means that they cannot be replaced. Indeed, there are a flood of people having a hobby of selecting books and newspapers that we can claim that they will still be purchased in the future In addition, printed newspapers and books are not as detrimental to people’s eyes as online ones because looking at the screen for such a long time can bring them serious myopia and other eye’s problems, which leads people to avoid reading online. Additionally, there are many readers enjoying reading paper-based books since it provides them the sense of relaxation and comfort that reading online cannot. “Harry Potter and the Philosopher's Stone” is a prime example as there is a huge amount of this book published and sold every year.
In conclusion, although people nowadays are inclined to read things online due to the convenience that it provides, I hold a firm belief that printed newspapers and books are irreplaceable.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun people is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
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Suggestion:
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'floods'?
Suggestion: floods
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, look, may, so, still, therefore, i think, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1735.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74225929619 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.492795389049 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 546.3 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.5541742238 49.4020404114 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.583333333 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.9166666667 20.7667163134 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1666666667 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264212971923 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101166510874 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530144119254 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167310655726 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0377525444659 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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