The maps below shows an industrial area in the town of Norbition, and planned future development of the site.
Summerise the information by selectig and reporting the main features, and make comprarison where relevant.
The given map below illustrates a current town of Norbition and its future adjustments plan. Overall, it can be seen that the industrial area is totally transfered into a public living space. Houses and new amenities such as playground, shops, a school, and a medical centre are being built.
To begin with, the area now has eight factories which are replacing by houses some of them in the west side whereas the others are in the east side in the future plan. Comparing to the future development more roads are introduced in the south and the west of the spot as well as a small bridge above the river resutling in decreasing the area of the farmland.
Moreover, newly build facilities are going to be there. Some shops will be built in the western south of the town, and a medical centre in the front of shops. There will be a school on the east near to a children playground.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'maps'.
Suggestion: maps
The given map below illustrates a current town of Nor...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
moreover, so, well, whereas, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 727.0 965.302439024 75% => OK
No of words: 160.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54375 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48990932315 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59375 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 223.2 283.868780488 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0140247535 43.030603864 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.875 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.875 5.23603664747 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151187977878 0.215688989381 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0628346744551 0.103423049105 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.076437304353 0.0843802449381 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0981605637791 0.15604864568 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0613796504786 0.0819641961636 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 11.4140731707 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.