In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way.
Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
Nowadays, because of advevts are everywhere many companies are trying to prove that they produce the latest products. This is highly due to that they might put or develop something new so those businesses market their items as Brand new, also, this is a marketing hack since they know people tend to buy the new things. In my opinion, this is a negative trend because of the social media and the developed technology no such things could be hidden.
On the one hand, businessman and women try to emphasis that all their products are the newest in the field. This is because that they may introduce only one new feature to consider their items new. Furthermore, this is a key marketing that massive corporations followed since they believe that folks always seek things that never been used before. For example, whenever Apple launch a new series of iphone, people without knowing all the features that are in the new device tend to stand for long queues in order to get that phone before anyone else.
On the other hand, this could be considered a negative development due to the fact that these days with the high level of technology and social media applications no thing could be hidden. In addition, individuals would know all the pros and cons of the product eventually. For instance, those people who waited for hours to purchase the new iPhone with after one or two months share all the information about the products online on their platforms hence, many humans might change their mind about the device, thus this would lessen the firm’s sales.
In conclusion, many corporations using advertising tend to prove that they are the best in the field and provide the newest items. This essay is discussed the possible reasons beyond this, and why this phenomenon is considered a negative one.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 164, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[2]
Message: Did you mean 'nothing'?
Suggestion: nothing
...echnology and social media applications no thing could be hidden. In addition, individua...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, may, so, thus, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1499.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85113268608 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43166361249 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546925566343 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.1759810868 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.916666667 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.75 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6666666667 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24086139875 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0881447693987 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0608778063331 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153122712717 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0163362776081 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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