Nowadays, most people try to balance between work and other parts of their lives. Unfortunately, not many achieve this balance. What are the problems with this? Suggest some solutions to solve the problems.
In the contemporary world, balance between work and others parts has proven to be a major obstacle humanity in both developed and developing nations. To deal with its negative ramifications, is it felt that some changes on time table and government subsidies should be implemented. In this essay, an analysis of the consequent problems and their suggested remedies will be made.
There are number of social problems arising due to can’t balance work an others parts. First, it directly correlates to the growing discrepancy between development of society, which means that the person will have many job to need complete and they can balance their work will ensue. Company manager or director, for example tend go to company very early and have many things in company need them complete, thereby people with higher positions at work, the less there are times, while the authorities imperative them just complete many job at the same time but don’t have any free time for them. In addition, people often hard working for their job because their company’s deadline so can’t balance work or other parts, compromising other life parts interest.
Nevertheless, some feasible solutions to the issue should be considered. First, imposing a vacation or travel for people, let them body arrange time for family or their friends and government can raise wars for those tho work hard or the less privileged. This would give those who live far from home, who have married, equality good time opportunity for others parts of their life through a vacation. Facilitation and encouragement of access to employment, moreover, would reduce people have bad health for their work.
In conclusion, while try to balance work within society and influence over people health are among the consequences of economic inequality, some viable solutions could be taken into account.
It is believed that all people have been supporting balance for other parts, however, it could be a long time to see the belief turning into reality at least in a foreseeable future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 214, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun job seems to be countable; consider using: 'many jobs'.
Suggestion: many jobs
..., which means that the person will have many job to need complete and they can balance t...
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Line 2, column 531, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun job seems to be countable; consider using: 'many jobs'.
Suggestion: many jobs
...thorities imperative them just complete many job at the same time but don’t have any fre...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, while, at least, for example, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1715.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15015015015 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66255465773 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573573573574 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 540.0 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.7577951638 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.923076923 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6153846154 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.38461538462 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308401278995 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116459328886 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0573664441562 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162821671096 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0553334187753 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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