The graph shows the change of average salaries in various spheres of employment in the US over a period of 40 years.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, make comparisons.
The line graph demonstrates the salary trends of three different industries in the US over the forty-year period from 1970 to 2010.
In general, the salaries for Professional sports, Engineering and IT experienced either a downward or an upward trend. As regards the first, the salary for people working in professional sports fluctuated slightly over the first thirty years with an upward tendency, reaching its peak at 145.000 in 2000. After that, there was a sudden fall to about 110.000 at the end of the period.
However, the earnings for both Engineering and IT went up by varying degrees.There was a rapid growth in the salary of IT workers. Originally, IT workers' payment accounted for the smallest 35.000 in 1970, then it exceeded the income for Engineering in 1985 ending the year up with 100.000. Furthermore, salaries for Engineering rose slowly from 55.000 to 70.000 over the period.
Overall, although the salary for Professional Sports is higher than for the others, it is the only one that had a noticeable decrease.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 78, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: There
...ering and IT went up by varying degrees.There was a rapid growth in the salary of IT ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, then, as regards, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 873.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 171.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10526315789 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.846878287 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619883040936 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 243.9 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.3988811535 43.030603864 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.125 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.375 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.625 5.23603664747 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122888647952 0.215688989381 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0633145856087 0.103423049105 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558342908598 0.0843802449381 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0913099153156 0.15604864568 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0641026438623 0.0819641961636 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.