The perceived greatness of any political leader has more to do with the challenges faced by that leader than with any of his or her inherent skills and abilities.
Write a response in which you discuss either agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not be true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Leadership is the ability of a person to lead himself and his people and also take the initiative to solve problems for his people either by himself or with the help of his people. Great leadership comes with influence. A great political leader is usually one that has done something extraordinary for his people. One of the most crucial ways to measure this is by the number of difficult situations that the leader has helped his people reason. Abilities and Skills are just mere advantages that can help resolve the difficult situations; thus, if there are no critical situations to resolve, a leader might as well not have need for the skills.
Nelson Mandela; a political activist for many years and also the former president of South Africa is well known throughout Africa for the number of challenges he had to face while striving for the independence of his people. He was imprisoned for several years, constantly humiliated and also had to lose his wife in the struggle for his country’s independence from colonial masters. His name is revered everywhere even in his death for the number of challenges he had to face. If his country were to list great political leaders in his country, his name would never miss the list even in Africa. Indeed, there must have been presidents after him with who had inherent skills and abilities but are not were known nor considered great because they had no difficult situations to challenge. This indicates the role that challenges play in the quality of great leadership.
Aside from political leaders, it is a known fact that people who do the bare minimum are hardly noticed or even celebrated. We have people in every field who have the skills but still are not considered great or even noticed. Scientists like Isaac Netwon, Avogrado, Albert Einstein are still considered great scientist because of the quality and influence their research has in our world.
One might argue that problem solving skills among other skills and also the ability to manage people are very crucial for effective leadership. Despite the need for these skills, leaders need good opportunities to put them to good use. If there are no extraordinary issues at hand, people would still consider anything done by a political leader as the bare minimum.‘It is through challenges that we know a man’s might’ is an adage by Yoruba people of Nigeria. This adage simply means that a person’s level of greatness can only be determined through the challenges a person face and how he overcomes them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, thus, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 33.0505617978 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2112.0 2235.4752809 94% => OK
No of words: 427.0 442.535393258 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94613583138 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54576487731 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64859909023 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 215.323595506 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.47775175644 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 666.9 704.065955056 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.14494653 60.3974514979 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.333333333 118.986275619 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7222222222 23.4991977007 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.38888888889 5.21951772744 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217776046996 0.243740707755 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0787209853444 0.0831039109588 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0427008922655 0.0758088955206 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132563503696 0.150359130593 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0585986047746 0.0667264976115 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 14.1392134831 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 100.480337079 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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