The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time doing housework and households in one country between 1920 and 2019.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
The two charts show the changes in the families owning electrical appliances and the relative amount of time they spend doing housework in households in one country in nearly 100 years, between 1920 and 2019.
The first chat shows the percentage of households with electrical appliances includes washing machine, refridgerator and vacuum cleaner. Regarding to the washing machine, the percentage accumulate in a slowly way. From 1920 to 2019, the percentage just increased about 30%. In other aspect, the percentage of the households using refridgerator increased strongly. From 1920, which had the usage at 0% low to 2019, which had the usage reached 100%. The usage of refridgerator increased about 40%-50% each 20 years from 1920 to 1960. vacuum cleaner also had a big change which also reached 100% of usage in 2019.
According to the second chart showing the number of hours of houseworks per week, per household, they spent less time for houseworks. That amount minified clearly in a strong way from 50 hours per week to 10 hours per week.
In overall, electrical appliances have a huge affect in people lives. The bigger percentage of households owning electrical gadgets, the smaller number of hours people doing houseworks. they relate to each other with inverse ratio.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 200, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('slowly') instead an adjective, or a noun ('way') instead of another adjective.
...g machine, the percentage accumulate in a slowly way. From 1920 to 2019, the percentage just...
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Line 2, column 532, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Vacuum
...0%-50% each 20 years from 1920 to 1960. vacuum cleaner also had a big change which als...
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Line 3, column 163, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a strong way" with adverb for "strong"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ouseworks. That amount minified clearly in a strong way from 50 hours per week to 10 hours per ...
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Line 4, column 186, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...umber of hours people doing houseworks. they relate to each other with inverse ratio...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, regarding, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 7.0 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1076.0 965.302439024 111% => OK
No of words: 208.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17307692308 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70170064784 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524038461538 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 305.1 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.8709905657 43.030603864 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.7692307692 112.824112599 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 22.9334400587 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.92307692308 5.23603664747 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 3.70975609756 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248719972678 0.215688989381 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0861470727093 0.103423049105 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107369043218 0.0843802449381 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181158091361 0.15604864568 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.145152054071 0.0819641961636 177% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 61.2550243902 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.