In many countries, more and more young people are leaving school and unable to find job after graduation. What peoblem do you think youth unemployment will cause to the individual and society? Give reasons and make suggestion.
In a variety of nations, senior students leave their university and are not capable of getting occupation opportunities after graduating. It not only leads to joblessness in young age but it also causes a variety of issues for personal and communities. It will be discussed and given explanations and also some advice.
At the beginning, unemployment is a popular issue with young generations after leaving their academy. There are several explanations about why new graduate pupils can not have get job chance. First, boys or girls inevitably get rejected when applying for some work experience. For example, education in numerous countries does not pay attention to tutoring students to reality, they just think knowledge without practicing in real life . Furthermore, youngsters controlling skills are not sufficiently strong to cope with reality, too much imagination is one of main factors that make failure. For instance, according to plenty of investigation, staff having a strong spirit and high attitude with work have a tendency to keep them to continue working.
As a result, definitely anticipate several disadvantages about youngster’s idleness . Citizens can not have money to purchase their own items or even pay for fundamental bills for life such as energy, food. Furthermore, consumption power will be steadily decline and indirectly lead to reduction economy. Besides, authorities can not gain more budget through pedestrians salary by paying taxes , which is one of the main resources. Accordingly, there are numerous measures to decrease of increasing unemployment in nations. For instance, enhancing education quality, concentrate more in getting more internships for some companies. Each employee has to get acquainted with difficulty and have spirit and professional attitude with applying acquired knowledge learnt are keys to succeed. Additionally, the government should have some regulations about finding occupations for inhabitants to accelerate the employment rate.
In conclusion, it is undeniable that youngsters being out of work is still a tremendous issue to today’s society. It will lead to severe economic downturn if it appears for a long time and following the steps above to get the best result.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, besides, but, first, furthermore, if, so, still, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1900.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.55555555556 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13658279802 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616959064327 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 601.2 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.2575690268 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 100.0 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.68421052632 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111763008022 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0343998735642 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0330697200786 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0649885454064 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.027139605494 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.67 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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