More and more people are migrating to cities in search of a better life, but city life can be extremely difficult. Explain some of the difficulties of living in a city. How can governments make urban life better for everyone?
Individuals living in rural areas migrate to cities to find a better life, but city life contains a lot of impediments. This essay will look at some primary causes and offer some possible solutions to the problem.
There are a number of reasons for the difficulties of life in metropolises. The first reason is job opportunities. Rural residents usually move to cities in order to find high-income jobs, but their levels of education are awful which limits their access to a better life. Another reason is the high expenses needed to live in cities. In metropolises, everything from commodities to services is prohibitively expensive and people migrating from the countryside may not afford the costs of their life. As a consequence, migrators find it rigorous to live in urban areas and divert back to their countryside.
There are several actions that could be taken to mitigate the problem mentioned above. Firstly, governments can encourage large companies to allow teleworking and put more emphasis on education in rural areas to improve the quality of residents' knowledge, so they can seek high-income jobs. Secondly, governments may decrease the taxes, so the expenses of residents' life can be reduced for their affordabilities.
In conclusion, there are various factors leading to the impediments of city life and measurements can be implemented to tackle this issue.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, as to, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1158.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 221.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23981900452 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07596471634 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592760180995 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 379.8 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1192093853 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4166666667 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.392511092727 0.244688304435 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126478744083 0.084324248473 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105519006232 0.0667982634062 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.231209105829 0.151304729494 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0477399370069 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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