Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Even if science and technology would continue to advance and improve the quality of people' lives, the most significant improvements have already taken place.
you live only once(YOLO) is a most trending phrase in today's generation. it had a greater impact on the audiance and it was most widely accepted by people of different age, era, generations. there is a reason for this phrase to be so popularised. you see, it has a meaning- explained in the most simple way- you live only once so live the way you like it. but it also not necessarily mean by causing any kind of damage to others.
life is never easy, and our current way of living is what we called so modrenised and sophesticated , with the invention of many things which help us by making our day to day lives easy and we depend on them so much for things to get done. Now the question arises "is that so wrong? "
according to me, No! but there is always a line that determines the right or wrong and one must have morale to not cross it.
This is one life that we have got and i think it is not wrong to enjoy and take advantage of the advancement that the technology has provided us. but should that affect the genertions to come next? -Definately not!
I say that technology has no limit, with each day passing it is evolving so much. there are things being enhanced or invented each day and that is pure knowledge and you cannot stop knowledge. there are so many inventions yet to take place in future too, and the inventions have started as back as the day fire was invented. Not all choices or inventions may cause harmful effects, but we have to accept the fact that there is a possibility for that to happen may be in one or the other, and care must be taken to prevent them or either stop them. one must think above their capacity to reach their concern globally and own every inch of earth and swear for its protection.
we cannot see what future holds for us, but it is our responsibility not to create any negative impact for future generations, it is always about making the right choices by thinking about the environment as well.
To conclude, you can always enjoy the advancements and modrenization as no life is easy and they help us in getting through the days, on the other hand, you have a mere responsibility towards the nature and environment as well, afterall, it is called Mother earth for a reason-you protect the nature and the nature will protect you. so lets make life on earth sustainable for all the generations which are yet to come without any obstruction.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, well, i think, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 29.0 13.8261648746 210% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1963.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 442.0 407.700716846 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.44117647059 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58517132086 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54559890474 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.488687782805 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 636.3 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 8.0 1.86738351254 428% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.1084092713 48.9658058833 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.055555556 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5555555556 20.6045352989 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.61111111111 5.45110844103 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.53405017921 154% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 5.5376344086 289% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126695746657 0.236089414692 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0402473334948 0.076458572812 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.041509361826 0.0737576698707 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0587140913817 0.150856017488 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0396237174092 0.0645574589148 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.77 10.9000537634 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.