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Children nowadays prefer electronic games to other games and toys. Why is it happening? Is it a positive or a negative trend?
Rapid technological revolution, Software Company’s delivers attractive, entertaining computer games to target children which make them to elude other extracurricular activities. It is a negative development, continuous playing computer games which affects children both mental and physical health.
Electronic games with audio effects engage children to play for long hours. Children are not allowed outside for playing without supervision. So they choose computer or other electronic games to fulfill their gaming spirit. Due to lack of space in apartment or home to play, they selecting compute...
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